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Lifes A Prison, and Honey, Im The Murderer.

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Waiting on the inside, Just screaming to get out.
The painful tears, the angry shouts.
The maddening expression on your own face as all hope of keeping it in vanishes.

As she fights her way out, you spiral down into a deep darkness.
And hold onto the last glimmer of control that you had.
But its too late.

The blood pools on the floor, the corpse lies at your feet.
The horror projected in a single spray of red across the wall.
She goes back into her safe shell, your left with all the blame,
And its your own lie to tell.
I.N.N.O.C.E.N.C.E

But what can you say?
Padded walls and whitewashed halls are all you have to gain.
So you keep your mouth shut, and hope for the best.
And the padded walls turn cruel and hard.
And the whitewashed walls fade to grey.
And the bars to keep you everyday.

Lifes a prison, and Honey, Im The Murderer.

Author notes

Yeah... About some issues im having right now. Allthough not this serious.

Y'know when you just flip? And cant remember a thing? and its so out of character your sure its someone else? Yeah.

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  • XHollowXEyesX
    August 5, 2008

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    this is an awesome write. I loved how you described what you were feeling, and the whole sense of not remembering the moment when you 'flip' out really stands out in the poem. great use of language.
    Thanks for entering
    All the best
    ~Hollow~


  • disgrace
    August 1, 2008
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    ha wow thats great


  • Yorkshire Rose
    August 1, 2008
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    Emtionally blows u away


  • Misplaced Minds
    August 1, 2008
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    Safe :)

    the feelings really show, realy loving it (:


  • SuicidalGhost
    August 1, 2008

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    Wow thats amazing...
    i acan really feel the emotion, im guessing this beats he first. if not then WOW!!!!!


  • JessieJADORE
    August 1, 2008

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    ace :) i love it (:

    i can tell exactly how you were feeling at the time.t his is dead powerful (: i love it.

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