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Touching Many Directions

Missing image
 

love buried in prayer,

bears a star-ish fate,

pushes light tight to the dew-scented ground.

we waited and waited with

dandelion-finite-fingertips capturing

light-sprouted-forms beneath a bench dedicated,

in loving memory of and to,

lonely, half-starved souls who save each other...

in proper order of appearance...

centuries apart,

with a distance softer than the

flushed faces of eternal lamplight.

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  • Stirrer of Stardust
    August 22, 2008
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    Holy smmmookes!

    Wow.....the soft essence of this piece reaches through the page to envelop and tease the reader with the whispered breeze of its breath.

    The imagery this evokes behind my eyes leaves me with a smile, and a strong desire for more.....much more.

    You've left me flabbergasted.

    ~ ~ Love & Blessings, Janet ~ ~