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Grillenflügel

Mein Klang als Teil von mir
so tief durchdringt mein Wesen
ich kann mich ihm ergeben
schräg und schön und voll
erfüllt
angezerrt so nah weil schön
ein Ton der Körper wird und ist
aus weichem Ei den Panzer formt...

Zum Tanze schwingt das Bein
den Grillenflügel
und schmiedet
in Ketten
den Schall

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  • Hot Llama Love
    October 15, 2008
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    Nice. Very nice.


    • herrlurch
      October 15, 2008
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      Happy if you read it in German,

      It's the richer version. There's an English (weak, as almost every) translation in case you missed sth.

  • Angelshadow
    October 7, 2008

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    Sadly I have forgotten most of my german and I will still have to look up alot of words to understand the poem.

    But nevertheless, I am certain it is a wonderful poem in your language.

    Danke.

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