Hollowed silence
created within
a realm of listless void.
Like reverberating echoe's
in a distant galaxy.
Chants of beguiling
vibrations
whispered inside a
drifting mind.
Author notes
darell ( Amaranthine Lover )
A contest entry
- solitude by tara wilson.
2700 points, ended August 20, 2008, 42 entries
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Comments
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I like your voice that you have developed in this piece.
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I like insulated in the title too, well done, our thoughts are so much louder in solitude..wonderful entry, thank you..
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Alone with your thoughts...
Nice.
Joe
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Interesting how you used to title to make the moment more specific.
Thanks for this.
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I loved the simple beauty of this and the way it flowed.
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Inspiring write
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This is so beautiful! A whisper of ahhhh... all over.
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I love the dreaminess of this, Well written and it sounds great when read out loud.
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Stunning Write
Solitude can be ecstasy that embraces the soul of man and proctects him when the need to be alone arises.....deep in thoughts.....novy
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maybe my mind will return soon.......it's in another galaxy....nicely done!
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the void of explanation is one that echoes first, and from that origin, makes the vast outside seem wider than space is, this is gracious a melody, those driftings could ever aim to achieve. Seeing that we are speaking of an emotion, you have reinvented the soul for us to image. very well done. Sir T.
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Great piece!
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Oh I really like this! I've read several entries for this contest, but I'm loving this one the most so far! Good luck with it!
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