Sight, without vision.
Embrace, without touch.
Pleasure him in ways you'd never expect.
Feel the strength of his biceps,
Pulling her closer to his abdomen.
He's haulted by cuffs,
But dares to squeeze her full breasts.
She moans like an injured creature,
As she rides him like the waves of the ocean.
Surfing the waters of passion
He exhale's a sigh of ecstacy,
And takes..
~Control~
Author notes
Contest for Immortally Yours:
A contest entry
- Adult Picture Prompt - 18+ ONLY by Asylaarix.
300 points, ended August 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
525 points, ended September 2, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - erotic lust or making love by Blissfullhatred.
800 points, ended August 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very good. I like this one. It's short and sexy and very well written. Thanks for entering.
Billy's Baby
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Very nice, this is a great poem. I would like more detail, but it is also nice to have it left to the mind. Well done.
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'She moans like an injured creature'
What a girl!
Wish I could have her!
Brilliant, honey!
Kisses all over...
Galaxy2
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wow. this is sensual without crossing the line of being crude. it's a perfect balance of beauty and sex. "Sight, without vision.
Embrace, without touch." Something different, but still a great write
X
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Oh my! I think I need to go check out that picture prompt! Steamy poem, quite the afternoon 'pick-me-up' lol anyways good luck in the contest!
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