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Mighty Hecate, Dread Queen of the Night

An eclipse of heaven and hell,
a storm paused amidst furious might,
with thoughts that enter my head,
rushing to heard,
deep in my imagination, where all thing are possible
where fun and laughter reign, where around each bend is a discovery,
vengeance untempered by sanity,
turning the land into an ocean of blood,
to fertilize and feed,
the next generation of blood.

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  • nilav
    August 5, 2008

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    this is really striking with some powerful expressions that make the reader reflect on....congrats on the trophy..


    • Amythest Moonjade
      August 7, 2008
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      Merry meet,

      Thank you for your applause and for commenting. I was amazed the way this came out.


      Amythest


  • Melodies
    August 1, 2008

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooo!

    A dark and deep adventure is taking place in this splendid poem! No one would ever guess that the poem is built from scattered lines. Impressive write on all counts.


    • Amythest Moonjade
      August 1, 2008
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      Merry meet,

      Thank you for your applause. It was weird how this came out, I actually pretty proud of it.


      Amythest