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[empty birdhouses]




empty birdhouses
span across the lowest limb
mother’s many pets










Author notes

My mother was an obsessive collector - I could open an antique store. Birdhouses were one of her many.

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  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008

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    oh I like this . It make me think she's passed away, as the birdhouses are empty.. And i like the idea of the birdhouses themselves being pets Very cool.

    thanks for entering and g'luck.

    -sailor ptolema


  • notorious gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    LMAO your AN is always so short and funny somehow.

    I could easily see this winning something!!!

    "lowest limb"<--cool alliteration, and just cool phrase.
    "mother's many pets"<--Funny & hilarious "Aha" ending.

    I liked this!!