You cheated on me many a time,
For that you hurt me
You lied maliciously through your teeth,
For that you hurt me
You put me down with unkind words,
For that you hurt me
You stole my heart and fed it to the wolves,
For that you hurt me
I was so blind, but now I see
I see that you only brought hurt to me
A contest entry
- Write about an X its closure time by Shydreamer3.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow, sounds like this person really brought grief, anger and a whole lot of pain. and when we are going through them stages of life, we are blind, unable to see. some time soon though, we will realize what is truely happening. you done a very nice job at writing this. so many people can relate.
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I'm one of many who can relate, alot said in a few lines, great write.
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I like this..many ppl can relate..great write
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I loved this even though it was so short it was to the point. Yes we have all been here and if you havent then you are one of the lucky few. I think I have been here more then once I guess i am just cursed or doomed as they say. But from your comments you seem like a pretty stand up guy who isnt afraid of an independently strong women. So what women would do this to you, but be stupid. Great write.
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Sincere pain is truly the best to learn from. We learn so much about others and ourselves. Nice write.
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Awwwwww. What a shame. Did your ex know what a talent you are, hmmm? Well done with this piece indeed! I really felt with you, which some poets are at want to make me do. Of course I wish you all the best in the contest!
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great job you will be considered.
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DANG I like this I've felt this way only once B4 and it wasn't any fun at all but for being a shorter piece it has a lot of emotion that I was able to pick up...Good Job
always~Steph
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