Well I say love is where you
don't have to say sorry
Where two people stand as equals
and not as two different people
That love can be so pure,
innocent and sweet
But theres another side
to this tender tale
This is one of pain,
longing and sadness
The thing about love
is that it so magical,
amazing and unforgettable
All of the bad times are
wiped out by the good
This is what I call that weird thing called love
Author notes
thye colourful light
A contest entry
- how do you feel by musicalangel1449.
500 points, ended August 6, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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love is truely wierd
true 1st impression:- good, but i have read better ones by you.
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great work on this and i love your definition and how you expressed. i also really now what to sing
WHAT IS LOVE. BABY DONT HURT ME, DONT HURT ME. NO MORE lol
thanks so much for the entry -
You did a great job of making your stance on Love known in this poem! Well Done!
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very accurate take on love, its nto just roses and happiness there is pain to it....awful awful pain but magnificent joy so its very crazy, i think you wrote this very well and it was a pleasure to read
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x= I gotta agree with you.
"But theres another side
to this tender tale" I thought that slowed the rhythm, but it's ok x;
Great job, thanks for cmnting.
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You described this thing called love very well my dear. Congratulations on your HM.
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love it...
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yeap!
this is exactly what i'd describe love to be too! this is a beautiful write! love is complicated, but i guess thats what makes everyone long for this amazing feeling!
keep penning! >.<
STUNNING!
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This was a very well-crafted poem.
Lovely thoughts & beautiful descriptions
thank you for sharing -
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sweet. honest. sincere. just like it like it.
lovely write
thanks so much for the entry!
best wishes and best of luck! -
...indeed! this is amazingly great...congrats!
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This is a beautiful poem, it makes you think more about your life and the choices you make about your "love"
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tank u!
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This is such a beautiful wrie. I like how you have incorporated both the good and bad sides of love. That no matter what you can forgive the other person. Very sweet. Congrats on the HM, thank you for commenting on one of my writes as well.♥
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you bring up come very good points. It's weird how love can bring happiness and sadness, depending on what occurs. Very nice poem
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congrats on the hm. What you say is true. Good things and times wipe out all of the bad. thank you for entering the contest.
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well done, vez. I(J) agree completely. xxx
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yup! love is pretty weird sometimes. Yet it is amazing! Very good! thanks for entering!
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That's really sweet. It says a lot. The transition between the good and the bad hits hard, yet it's still positive overall.
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