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Worthless

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The clock strikes midnight.
I am
Peaceful.
Broken.
Simple.
Forgotten.
yet worthless.
and all together whole.

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im not relly surere what this is. i jus got bored and wanted to write sumtin to go along with my myspace name...

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  • serenity silvermoon
    December 19, 2008

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    this was short and sweat you have great talent this poem says something trueful but i cant think what thanks for sharing keep up the great work god bless

    serenity


  • hks
    October 6, 2008
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    your poetry's really unique- a breath of fresh air.

    much love