experience stretches imagination...
trial's enthusiasm battles error's greed,
my journey begins, wandering through my imagination,
hesitation dances with procrastination, then I see,
viciously voicing my doubts
your words in jest
sail
across the
dark and lonely, cold desolate shore,
lost and broken I've been here before.
Author notes
lol Easy! You just take the first line of your most recent poem and that will be this new poem's title.
The first two lines of your second most recent poem will be the start of your new poem.
Go to your third poem and take the next two lines.
Do this again with your fourth poem and fifth and sixth poems.
Now you have a ten-line poem.
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ A funny take on "Cento" ~~ Yet AGAIN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Dear elemental angel: Love your words choices in this poem. Very descriptive, making this poem even better. Love, Janjan xoxo
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works well i think - yeah takinglines from previous poems and then making abrand new one, a good job.
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Whoa , this is damn good made the back of my neck tingle when i reached the end , maybe thats because i have been there before too , Great great piece congratz !!
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TERRIFIC!
A tantalizing poem that stands up proudly against any others!
Wonderful writing that slides down the lines gracefully to a rhyming couplet to set it off. 
You can be very proud of this one, good poet. 
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