Why pain?
Why sorrow?
Why terrorism?
Why death?
Why love?
Why betrayal?
Why lies?
Why lust?
What have I done tok deserve this?
When will this crying stop?
Just please PLEASE STOP!!
Have you ever experienced something like this?
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this is pretty good. keep uo the good work!!! -slick99
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a little vague but i can see wat ur gettin at. keeps reader guessing
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i am a little confused what the poem is about but it was it was a great write
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welcome to all poetry
Hi peanuts
I think we have all walked in these shoes before
good poem please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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Welcome to AP. My first critique on this poem is: change the background. I don't mind hiding the background, but someone might.
I like this, really, what with all the questioning. It's great, to try and delve into our souls and the world around us...to solve the riddles of life...although sometimes we cannot do so. I have often done so before, but usu. come up empty.
Well done and again welcome to AP.
Minor change: "tok" - "to"
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