I'm so darn fed up,
With everything
Love hasn't been easy
This past year has
Young lovers
Ignored by the world
I'm so tired of everything
Working my butt off
Sitting alone upon the dewy lawn
Stuck in a deep ponder
Author notes
I changed two words to be non cuss words. this is hillarious.
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ A funny take on "Cento" ~~ Yet AGAIN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is an incredible poem that you have got here Molly.. wow, excellent job with this.. I can see you sitting on the lawn doing exactly this. wonderful imagery..
I love you
mommy
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LOL
Oh I love the congtest holder as I know that poet quite well. any ways my dear ebautiful sweet loving Molly this is an incredible poem and I really loved how you hit the hammer on the nail head beautifully with that ending. it really livened up the entire poem and I loved the over all beautiful picture you presented with the poem. any ways good work and keep it up =) Love, Paul =)
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OH MY everlasting GOSH!
This poem is wonderful! Just look at that, will you? I can just see you sitting on your lawn thinking all this, right straight through. 
It's okay that you changed two cuss words. 
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