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Cdo

Sitting at my desk,
I see somthing out of place,
I run up to the board,
I must erase that face!
People laugh,
But it doesn't belong,
It looks happy,
But in school that must be wrong.
I disagree with people,
They say I have obsesive complusive disorder,
I simply tell them it's CDO,
All the letters in alphabetical order.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 7

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    in the third line, bored should be board. thank you for entering and i wish you well in this contest. viyanna rosemarie


  • EternallyAlone
    April 23
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    hehehe. funny, but not hilarious. You could have gone on more...


  • honey bear
    February 3

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    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest, it is very hard for people who have ocd and people often make fun of the things that they do not understand or are afraid of, this is a very strong write

  • Judith Chandler
    October 29, 2008
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    I love it, so funny. Maybe people are just analyzing sometimes; could be a sign of "CDO" to want to have a label for everything.

    It reminds me of jokes I've made about my own condition, bipolar disorder. I have taken to saying that everyone's bipolar! Not everyone gets it but, hey, I think it's funny.

    Your piece brightened my morning.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • sunflowers21573
    September 19, 2008

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    Ha ha, this is wonderful. I love this. I, too, have OCD and I found this quite humorous! You definitely deserved gold with this one. What a fantastic job. U are a very talented poet I must say.


  • Florida Sunshine
    August 28, 2008

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    LOL ~ This is great! LOL -- I'm still laughing. The only thing that could make me sad are those who just don't get this.... it's so freaking funny.

    OCD = Obsessive Complusion Disorder. Folks who suffer from this must have everything in 'order'. -- The need to put the letters in order, is simply just too funny.

    God forgive me... I'm not laughing 'at' the imagery you've painted... I'm laughing 'because' of the imagery you've painted. That's my story, I'm sticking to it. ~ ...

    Awesome job! Thanks for sharing this with me ~ It was my pleasure to read and review your work.

    Best of luck to you,
    Florida Sunshine


  • xCandieKissesx
    August 14, 2008
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    Fun-ieee

    They say I have obsesive complusive disorder,
    I simply tell them it's CDO,
    All the letters in alphabetical order.

    Hahah! Love that!! That's probably something I'd mispell also! Well, I'm crazy enough as it is! Lol, just jokin'. Great job and good luck!


  • sins and sorrow silver member
    August 1, 2008

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    Oh wow this was great!
    Especially loved the ending because it describes the disorder so well and uses it while describing it!
    Bravo!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!

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