Dark clouds, on sky's back, full of raging yesterdays.
Thundering lights, ready to strike a dancing moment
of earth herself, accompanied by penetrating sounds;
reconnect gloomy nerves, in her heat..
Collided air-atoms, waved a garment of alertness,
hot and cold interchanges, searching tonques awake
hidden colours, petrified dreams, for her heart is mine....
Disablement solves into steamy existence.
Author notes
Option #1 Picture Inspired. Picture is from http://breedstock.deviant.com/art/Shungmanitu-Thanka-Ob-Wachi-90760067
A contest entry
- It's Quickie Time Again!!! by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended August 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Outstanding
This is a very intense poem. I liked the imagery and the way you built layers of meaning within the poem. You describe the storm very well using personification to add depth and weight. Best of luck in the contest.
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a brilliant take on the promt full of great imagery and strong emotions good luck in the contest
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Excellent take on this prompt see you did it Yeah !!!!!!! best of luck in the contest
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wow excellent take on the prompt. I absolutely love it..I love the second stanza so very much. brilliant job with your poem..
good luck
kat
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lol I see what ~ you can do it I have faith in you
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