Down in the archway a maiden stands fair
playing her violin with no-one to share.
her hair is like the darkness of the night
her dress is a matching velvet gown
Her music is warm and passionate to
she will play the violin just for you.
Author notes
option#c 40-60 words 46 words 1 hour quickie
A contest entry
- It's Quickie Time Again!!! by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended August 1, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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Beautifully orchestrated and an enjoyable read ~ best of luck in the contest
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I can almost hear the music playing in this piece. It's very nice, and a touching poem here.
Wonderfully done with the prompt.
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this is such a sad emotional poem. one that seems haunting in its own way. sad in the sense she has no one to share her music or her life with.
great take on the prompt
good luck in the contest
kat
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very nicely written, captures a sad haunting type of romance (either one not destined to be or one yet to be discovered). well done and best wishes to you also.
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