Passions promise musically orchestrated as notes
promenade through moonlit trials.
Echoes travel unpaved paths,
catching a ride on gentle breezes;
as emotions spew forth off her bow,
sharing stories with companion strings,
living a tale.
Leaves upon midnight tree's capture loose words,
choreographing the memoirs of her life.
Author notes
http://erebusodora.deviantart.com/art/Passion-49502725
A contest entry
- It's Quickie Time Again!!! by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended August 1, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Wonderful expression for the contest. Congratulations on the gold.
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Meala naidheacht oirbh!
Beautiful write and pretty shiny! -
Beautifull done, full of lively imagery. Wonderfully line: "Leaves upon midnight trees capture loose words"....your whole poem is very smoothly. Great job! Good luck
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WOW.. this blew me away, the depth of this poem is amazing. my favorite lines are the last two.. excellent job with the prompt.. excellent..
good luck
kat
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wow a brilliant take on the promt full of great imagery and strong powerful emotions good luck in the contest
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Thank you hun
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good luck
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