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Hushed Memories

 

 

 

Hushed butterfly traced in fusion

caved and spellbound by pure beauty

 

Whispers of nothing left with everything

whilst pursed with secrets untold

 

Placed here for everyone to see

shadowed with loving memories

 

Dignified and broken

a place for secrets to roam free

 

Believing in the density of tomorrow

and loving every moment of today 

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Option B
Picture Credit: Sajhrnera by night-fat

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    "Believing in the density of tomorrow

    and loving every moment of today "


    really loved your last line here.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Whoa. You did a fantastic job with this. The pic was awesome, but the poem was full of incredible depth.
    Best of luck in the contest!!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • maralisa silver member
    August 1, 2008
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    a great take on the promt full of great imagery and strong emotions good luck in the contest


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    I really love this poem that you have written. its beautiful to me, I love the entire write.. I really like the last two lines of this though.

    excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat