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[ v1) WHAT has come over me? ]

v1) WHAT has come over me?
HOW is this happening?
I can feel the shadows filling up my mind.
THEY act like vampires,
SUCKing up their empire,
tentacles of terror creeping up like vines.

c) "Open up your mind, let the demons flow through."
That's what they said to me, but
I refuse to DIE
Once they see the obstacles
that I've made intolerable
They'll find it impossible
TO BREAK ME

v2) SOMEthing's lost and can't be found,
BURied deep beneath the ground.
Sanity is no longer
an option
THEY will not leave me alone
STAYing 'till my spirit's gone
they will have to wait for all
eternity

(chorus)

Author notes

need title. please contribute.
inspired by The Night by Disturbed

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  • For a title:
    How about Mental Shadows?
    Pretty good stuff!


  • Melissa Burns
    August 1, 2008

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    *~*~*~Oh it's a song, at first I was confused, why the captials But I get it now. Good Work!!!*~*~*~*