You have burnt my soul...
but
The flames you have imprinted in my heart
Are flames ignited
By passions of desire.
Love when felt...is the wheel of life.
We are the hubs which radiate it flames..
Love grows and dies.
It matures with age.
but
These same burning flames...
Can create pain and sufferings.
If we dont heed our pains warnings,
Our lives will become a shipwreck...
Destroyed by our dis-ease with ourselves
Which flame do you seek?
Loving burning flames
with imprinted treasures of memories
or
Eternal flames of pain and misery?
It's your choice to paint your destiny...
dragonheart1
Author notes
we burn like the flames and you are not even aware...Unknown
A contest entry
- even... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oooh me likie very nice i love how you used the duality of the smbolism of the flame. how it's the same and opposite all at the same time. its REALLY good. great job
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The words are burnt like the hearts in love ..the depth of the sprompt is wonderfully pourned in the poetry..well done..I love it..My thanks for shqaring it in my contest...
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This another well written poem in the style of free verse...speaking of the balance between love & misery
you have done an excellent job..........
novy
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