My heart sinks as I see it
Similar to mine, yet so much better,
Along with the rising sun
To solve everything
Opening flaps
One last time
On a winter sea where Griffins call
And magic sleeps
Shouting, screaming, "Whoah!
Can this thing not go fast, but slow?"
Author notes
Cento poem, I think it's called, pieced together from lines from my own poetry for this contest.
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ A funny take on "Cento" ~~ Yet AGAIN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This tells so many stories. The reader can just run wild with the imagery here. I like the way this turned out. Mine sucks LOL It seems all the others actually go together.
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What can I say brilliant ....am looking forward to reading all the entries
Good luck in this awesome contest.
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Laughing... This poem is so cool!
Amazing how your poem came together with the pieces telling a story that the reader can construct.
What fun it is to read and imagine! 
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