The thunder promises
Sweet, safe violence.
They said,
"It will make you strong."
Though he maintained that
She didn’t deserve the grace,
It's
True.
Settle down, honey -
Everything will be just fine.
Author notes
Haha, this is actually coherent. I'm impressed.
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ A funny take on "Cento" ~~ Yet AGAIN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this is beautiful, even though its made from so many different poems... mine sucks, lol.
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I guess I write on too many subjects because mine made no sense at all but yours came out like a lovely poem even though it is all different pieces.
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Lol. This sounds like it could actually be a complete poem instead of parts of other poems that are all mixed together. Great poem!
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WOw i am enjoying reading the entries yet I am surprised at how the lines can run and tell a tale that makes sense...nicely done
Good luck in the contest. Have fun
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Quite lovely and profound, actually...
Isn't this fun? 
Your poem is a wonderful free verse entry that could be described as a metaphorical wonderland. 
lol
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