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temptation

I whisper to you
and my suggestions leave
a silken trail across your skin

and even as you respond with longing
and embrace the outpouring, lips open
you at the same time gather
the strength to push me away, fists closed

Left blinded
and deafened
and wounded
by your silence

I despise your weakness
and admire your resolve
and ready myself to whisper again




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  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 21, 2008
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    i love this piece. fav so far thanks


  • queen Moderators member
    August 2, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi Moonswirlgirl

    Wow, this is so good, well done poet Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • Mr.
    August 1, 2008
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    Spicy! Good work.