If tame is to be lame
and humble to be ignorant
why should be a child,
if one could be a dog?
If one would wonder,
the one shall be insane.
For this is to wander,
for all that is known-
Dragging the head
to a carbon paper
walking by hand;
and a collar on the neck...
Critics and critiques are welcome :)
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galing!
The bond or connection bring forth a question of similarities and differences. I like how this give me that punch of why and then i realize and understand how the wave of life differ - one wave against the other.
cool title and i must say a succinct write kabayan.
my personal favorite from your work to date. the last stanza stirs me.
keep writing,
Hensley
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Salamat po
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Interesting poem. Makes you wonder what is the reaches between humanity and that of an animal. I find how the second stanza seems to be about thought and that wondering is to wander from what is known, cause all is known is an interesting and mind provoking idea. After all if all is known, who knows it and in what form? Anyway loved it, three cheers
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