i do not know why,
that i feel the need to cry.
Wish i was happy, or could just die.
but even my own mind wont reply
I wish i could leave behind all emotion,
feel like im in the middle of an ocean,
always outside all the commotion,
not knowing where to put my devotion
Not wanting be feeling depressed
rarely feeling as if i am blessed
Always here feeling so stressed
it is i who i detest.
A contest entry
- ♥anything and everything.♥ by JustsimplyKatiee..
550 points, ended August 30, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Imaginary by know one.
750 points, ended August 29, 2008, 109 entries
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I feel the same way...
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cool
great consepts here,but I felt the rhyme was forced. the meaning and statements are great,thanks for entering! -
Sad but meaningful write. I guess we've all felt like this from time to time. The imagery steps right out from your words...mal
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welcome to allpoetry
Such sadness written in your lines. A sadness that so many have known. I really like your second stanza. A great write, well expressed. Thank you fro sharing your thoughts and words here with us all.
Keep writing on.
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Nice. ^^
Ack, i hate the word nice, But there we go.
Loving this poem <3
Wish i could find that many words that rhymed with eachother.
xD
x ~Chloe~ x -
beautiful? idk that may be the word im looking for but im not sure. i do know that this was a great poem.
*hugs* tay. -
I love this Write!!
Its so deep and real. Keep up the good work. -
So many times we fee like this! I feel this way daily...and it becomes a daily battle to constantly fight past it. You did a wonderful job with this one! Thanks for sharing.
Warmest,
Mylee -
wow
...seems like a mirror of my feelings....from chatting with you i had know idea you were this deep, but i am an arrogant...something who makes judgments too quickly
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