I've been a bad boy
as bad as can be
Pants down I'm bent
so you can spank me
With a grin on my face
I'll look straight at you
and humble myself
while you do what you do
For all the years of pain
that I put you through
On this one holiday
I'll pay you my dues
Author notes
Hope this gives you a smile as your pic gave me!!
A contest entry
- As today would have been my wedding anniversary, I have only one thing to say! by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended August 1, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything you want by whispernthedark.
745 points, ended August 22, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That picture is funny as anything! You truly have a uniqe talent! I am really enjoying your words. Keep up the gretness!
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LOL! This was a funny pic. Had fun with this one. Thanks much
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lol lol and lol again but louder. This is very saucy and very very funny, cleverly written too
thanks for the chuckle *worthy *
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So glad you went way back and read this one... it was such fun to write! I did have a silver membership but someone stole our card number so until we get a new one I don't have the pictures on my poems but I guess people can go back to the contest and see what pic I wrote about! Ha!
Thanks again
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he he he this is hilarious...that picture is just gold and it was a really good match with the poem. I love that its short and punchy but so much fun!
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Thanks hon! This was really fun to write...to me he just looked like he needed a good spanking!!
Thanks for reading
darlintlc
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ha! I love this! It's so cute and fuuny.
"With a grin on my face
I'll look straight at you
and humble myself
while you do what you do"
That is really good. I was a little worried about what this would be about when I saw the title, but I got curious and I'm glad I did. This was great. good luck in the contest. -
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Ha ha!! Glad you liked it dear...it's one of my favs!
JUST HAD TO TAKE A PEAK!!! Never fear I don't write x rated! ha!!
darlintlc
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hey check out some of my new poems and tell me what you think!
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Great take on the picture. This is a cute write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Congratulations on the award!!
Well Done!!
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This was absolutely a perfect take on the picture and a perfect poem for it! I was laughing all the way through! I'm still laughing as I type this. Thanks for a great time! Looks like a winner to me!
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Thanks!! I'm glad u got a laugh from this poem and enjoyed it!
darlintlc
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LOL Awesome! I love this pic too! Thank you for your entry lol
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