Mommies looksee
I felt a tug on my shirt
I look down at my precious baby girl
a koolaid smile, disheveled hair
eyes that shine like diamonds
she gripped a paper she wanted me to see
I took it from her hands
scribbles were all there was
many colors she had included
I scooped her up into my arms
it's beautiful I told her
almost as pretty as you are sweet
I love you precious
I loves you more mommy
hugs and kisses off she goes to play
I proudly hang the picture
a master piece of Love
Author notes
My youngest really loves to draw, she is always making me something.
picture was contest prompt
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 1: Picture Prompts by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tired of HM's? (V) by PatheticKt.
300 points, ended August 16, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww, this reminds me of my little sister who used to draw me birthday cards
I kept them in one of my old folders, *sigh* . . .
. . . Anyway, I like the subtleness of this short write and the last two lines were quite an adorable touch to this piece ^^
Gosh, if I could go back in time, I would take all the potential reminiscences and placed them as picture frames for me to look at the bedside every time I wake up; lovely poem you got here, indeed
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thanks mom i love this poem
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Those days with are children don't last long enough. This poem is a delightful trip back in time for both of us.
'Mommies looksee
I felt a tug on my shirt'
Just perfect!
Thank you for sharing with us
Jem and Ju
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you know this will tug at many mommas heart strings I love the poem and the prompt! blessings always~ Trisha
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Thank you for your entry, good luck
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