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Say Not a Word My Love - Sonnet LXXXV

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      Delectable, that shade of non-such means
      that poses such, a soul to soul divine
      who more than once excitedly convenes.
      instruction, do initiatives entwine,

     Composed, that from a cuddle, both at ease
      gain know-how by suggesting we remain
      tranquil, so that a hint of total peace
     l
ets isolated bliss to silence reign.

     Say not a word my love, for this I show
     committed to the womb-like loveliness
     as sanctuary's independant flow
     more godly, than our sharing of love is.

     When two as one collide with equal might,
     the force from one explodes producing light.


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Author notes

Nothing is free than the entwine of a hug which enthrals the senses by obliging it, and the prompt:

Love: I Give It Away Free, you just have to ask,because true love is priceless...Unknown

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  • Wind 03
    August 21, 2008

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    touching:))))

    very touching piece! love is priceless there is no gift like the gift of love..

    when two as one collide with equal might,the force from one explodes producing light!!!!! wonderful statment...loved this part very much

    juliet

  • meena krish
    August 13, 2008

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    This is indeed a lovely and warm write about love and
    more over its a Sonnet..my favourite. Well done and
    congrtas on the win..take care.


  • michael thomas gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    this is a great poem.
    your vibrant youth-fullness
    and exuberance shines out in this.
    excellent.


  • jeck
    August 4, 2008

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    When two as one collide with equal might,
    the force from one explodes producing light.

    coool!! love it!


  • The Grimm Poet
    August 3, 2008

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    Another well crafted peace. Sonnets are not very common reads on this site but my favorite to read. keep writing them and i will keep commenting them


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 2, 2008

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    Humm..so true and so imaginative piece to love and to touch with it..well done.....I love it..and my thanks for sharing it...


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 1, 2008

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    this is so so beautiful love,
    i really enjoyed reading this, its so full of love,
    your the king of these sonnets hun,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • UnManned4Ever
    August 1, 2008
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    this is beautiful Tony, I like it, well done ! Keep up the good work.


  • z etoile
    August 1, 2008
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    Incredible piece of work. I love your style. keep writing.


  • JinSays gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Okay, I love you
    Wow!
    Beautiful, sweet and lovely. All the things I love about your writing are here. Delectable.

    Say not a word my love, for this I show
    committed to the womb-like loveliness
    as sanctuary's independant flow
    more godly, than our sharing of love Ahhhh!!!!!!!

    (siiiiiiiigh), you're quite the romantic here. Best wishes to you,
    Jin


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST TITUS, you are one of the best

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