Blatantly refusing therapy,
they threw me in the asylum.
Marred by the exposure to
violent tempered, bipolar
mates, my soul curled to
fetal position.
In my mind, tucked away,
meteoric, rants, survive.
Charred remnants collide,
with supernova effort,
to remember, that which
has been eradicated.
Extreme, pendulum swings,
boiler pressurizes,
insane thoughts percolate,
stabilize, re-craft,
as faceted gems.
Elevating hope.
Intricate psychology,
enmeshed with
small measure of
fiction, brings
cataclysmic results.
Assault; battery.
Rocketed to oblivion,
by unrivaled animosity,
I seek refuge in my mind.
Camouflaging, my pain,
not a shard of emotion
is revealed.
I materialize, on new level,
strapped, to bedposts,
arsenal of meds, by my side.
Spoon fed chocolate pudding:
token, to alleviate guilt.
I am not vindicated.
Author notes
Option #13 Word bank...I usually TRY to use them all...lol
this one was AWESOME!!
Cataclysmic Measure Driven Enmeshed Intricacies Meteoric Arsenal Vindicated Assault Insane Battery Asylum Refugee Unrivaled Collide Supernova Alleviate Percolate Faceted Camouflage Gem Eradicate Level Fiction Stabilize Shard Extreme Mar/Marred Pressurized Exposure Elevate Boiler Reveal Oblivion Token Materialize Violent Pendulum Bipolar Tempered
Rocketed Therapy Psychology
Rant
A contest entry
- FIVE YEAR AP ANNIVERSARY BASH!!!! by Auburn Sunrise.
5000 points, ended August 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Holy frijoles!!! You really do try to use 'em all don't ya?
I am impressed! More than impressed, I am awed and humbled. Remind me to always have a word bank option in my contests and message you to make you enter! LOL.
I love what you did with those words - you laced them together in a way that was fascinating and really quite shocking.
Normally when people try to write from word banks, and place the requested words so close together in compacted lines, it fails miserably. But you managed what I thought was impossible!
The subject and style were perfect. Either you read up on me and know me well to write what I like, or we have some of the same tastes.
Either way, this is a stunner.
Great entry! Thanks so much!!!
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IMPRESSIVE!
wow - I am impressed! This is outstanding from those words!!! Great job!!!
best wishes in your contest.
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Ok this has me tripping out, exceptional but everyone seems to have gone around the bend on my list!!
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OH WOW! What an incredibly tough word bank that you delivered with amazing and adept skill. Such images and power delivered...I'm so impressed!
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