Why is my summer special to me
Because I love my mommy
Where am I
Visiting her
How do I feel
Loved
Author notes
Option One: Write a poem about your summer vacation
A contest entry
- Children's Contest: For Children 9-12 by Shutting down.
600 points, ended August 18, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The tender love shared between a Mummy and child is so beautiful
I am glad you have lots of love especially during your summer
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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my parents are divorced to see my mom i had to take two flights all together fly time was 8 and half hours
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This is a touching write you have wrote here, I can't say i relate but i know all normal people will do
you have a talent in poetry, all my love,
best of luck in the contest,
kitty xxx -
Good luck in the contest!
Great job Lorien. This is a very sweet write you have here. I really like the way you have ended it... the last lines are really good. Thank you for sharing this and entering the contest.
Keep on writing.
~Kristy
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Awe. Touching, very touching. You know, I used to visit one of my parents during the summer when I was younger too. This is filled with emotion, great write. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Ahh just beautiful. You have taken the prompt and gone far beyond with your thoughts.
Thank you for your wonderful entry into our contest
Gaylene
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awww soo sweet, adorable and cute
(but where is your mum usually??)
Nice poem and cute poem,
keep on writing, and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
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