sleep deprived, and feeling depressed
no one to talk to, no wish to rest.
deep in thought, with a clouded mind
cant seem to leave bad thoughts behind
they stay in my head all through the day
nagging and nagging, wont go away
So what do I do, take more medication
which seems to only be raising frustration
headache persists, my problems don't clear
I have nobody close, have nobody near
What should i do? Where can i go?
Where wont my mood hit an all time low.
I go here, try there, move all around
where ever i am my mood seem to shoot down
lower, and lower, just keeps dropping
Not sure if it will ever start stopping.
Author notes
Poem on Depression.
A contest entry
- Am I crazy? {Options!!} by sins and sorrow.
575 points, ended August 3, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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This is a very interesting piece. Nicely written. I have an idea of which disorder you chose but please put it into your authors notes.
Thanks for entering and good luck. -
I love the title. Once again, good rhyme and flow to this piece. Lovely images.
Warmest,
Mylee -
Interesting write.
It's a shame your feeling this way but pull through man!
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