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Whispering Spirit

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I hear the voice of a whispering King
Of majestic times I hear him sing,
he calls my name, his face so near
within this pool, I see so clear.

A spirit King from times long past
though through the years his story last,
the warrior who stood so proud
with mighty roar that was so loud.

Now with it vision I am shown
my destiny, my place is known,
I will stand where he once stood
protect our pride like lions should.

For now though I must learn and play
watch and listen every day,
My destiny will come so soon
when I’ll stand King beneath the moon.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    A wicked piece! The rhyme and flow as ever is spot on Love the theme of this, goes very well with the picture. Beautifully done hun


  • Miss Chievous
    August 2, 2008
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    Wonderful! Great! The Rhyming souded great and the flow was purfect!!
    Good Luck!


  • Meroza
    August 1, 2008

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    oooh, I love cats and lions and this is brilliant! A perfect short story in a poem style. Its really good. I love it!

    Best of luck in the contest