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Reflection

 

 

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Sitting at the top of the world,

feeling so carefree and more alive than ever before.

I reflect on my past life and all that I have done.

Thinking of the many mistakes that I made along the way.

 

I always thought that I would have no regrets but,

something deep inside is telling me otherwise.

I should have been more cautious and aware.

Maybe, I would be happier and more stable in life.

So as I sit and ponder my life, I pray in time that you'll forgive me. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 7, 2008

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    "I always thought that I would have no regrets but,

    something deep inside is telling me otherwise." i 2nd that one

    great jo


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    You always find the most beautiful pictures for your poetry.
    This is so sweet, how could anyone not forgive after reading this touching and lovely piece,

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always

    Joyce


  • Angelflower
    August 1, 2008

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    Oh! this is really wonderful!! it brought tears to my eyes.. something I can very much relate to!!! You did such a wonderful job in bringing out such intense emotion from the picture.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • Rianna Bear
    August 1, 2008

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    stop getting in my brain like that!!! i feel exposed

    this was very beautiful, in all its saddness


    luvsya
    Rianna


  • trekkergirl
    August 1, 2008

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    Interesting but I felt there should be more to this. It felt unfinished to me. But what there was of it is well written and a good read. trekkergirl


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 1, 2008
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    oh and here's the applause you so deserve


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 1, 2008
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    Wow

    Wow I really liked this alot it's really good. you should definitely win....

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