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This is How I Feel, What About You?

I look into your eyes and see hope,
what do you see when you look in mine?
I felt entirely helpless until I met you,
what do you feel now that we've met?

I lay in your arms and feel warm and safe,
what do you feel when I hold onto you?
I kiss your lips ever so sweetly and feel intimacy,
what do you feel when our lips come together?

I see you walking towards me and I am joyful,
do you feel anything when you see me approaching you?
I hear your laughter and I can't help but laugh along,
does my laughter have any effect on you?

No matter how depressed I am or how bad my day is,
your presence is all I need to turn my whole day around.
Forever and a day will my heart be yours to keep,
but just tell me one thing, how do you feel?

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This is for Nicholas Lee Miles, July 7th, 2008.

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  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    August 22, 2008

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    This is so nice Touches my heart


  • MyMudPies
    August 1, 2008

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    aee, now this is the perfect example of the mind at work with only love as a fuel. I feel the fire in your heart for this boy. I see love that is so hard to find. Wonderful write and I am sure nick will love it.
    Stephanie