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The Beast

The bright moon begins to set
As I slowly fade away,
A wild dog starts a mornful howl
Then the deep black turns to grey,
Children wake from a goodnights sleep
Parents great the morning peace,
Animals roam to greet a new day
A bird steals bread, but just a peice.

There in the distance what could it be
What does it mean, what do I hear
Its not a war nor my great Aunt Diane
Could it be what I do ever fear
My most secret fear I never speak
The great, the terrifying, the beast...
My little brother Brian?!
But he's not scary, not in the least.

Do you have someone you love that doesn't even know you exist?

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  • TheDarkOne666
    April 15
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    sweet!

    thats nice, love the work you did on this. keep em coming


  • JustWhoIAm
    September 12, 2008

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    Haha, I love the ending, I thought it was going to be dark, and gothic, but no, you surprise us

    Great work ^^


  • SuicidalGhost
    September 1, 2008
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    didnt see that ending i must say lol great write

  • Loves HER Master
    August 2, 2008
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    Awesome

    morbid yet funny keep 'em comin'! oni-chan, ai shii teh (I love you)

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