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Bare Boned ( http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415814 )

I finally figured it out
I am a poet
a poet like no other
Stripped of all poetic
element
because that's what my life is.
That's what my soul is.
That's what my poetry is.

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  • and the honesty shared is accepted and acknowledged as well..vey true and very corr3ct..love the sharing indeed..and thanks..


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    August 13, 2008
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    woooo, yer a poet ^^ haha,great write, and i'm happy fer yer epiphany. ^^


  • aanika
    August 3, 2008

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    Stripped of all poetic
    element
    because that's what my life is.

    i love the way you write so everyone can relate.
    its beautiful
    good job


  • WretchedLove
    August 2, 2008

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    Well done!

    This piece is interesting. It's short, yet you were able to express yourself completely. Truly a wonderfully written piece. Bravo.

    Just as a thought, try expressing or explaining how you're "stripped of all poetic element". How is that your life?


  • SilverWolf
    August 2, 2008
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    woooo
    great!!!
    short
    but o soo powrful!


  • melphleg gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Bravo. Yes, your contribution to poetry is uniquely yours for you are unique.

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