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Silhouette

Her silhouette sits upon her back

and if you reach out to her you can feel

the whisper of the song she plays

Her body responds to the city's cry

as if there's nowhere else for her to be

and she allows the wind to show her wings

As you see her you can't help but stare

and know that the tattoo is the

window to her soul

that only she can see

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  • Angelflower
    August 1, 2008

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    This was really wonderful.. I really liked where you took this. the imagery was really vivid and this was surprisingly deep.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 1, 2008

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    This is great, you did very well
    with it. I love your imagery and
    story that you told here. Well done
    and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826