Soft Love

Hold my hand.
Hold my hand tight and never let it go.

Utterly yours.
In your arms.
In your grasp.

Consumed in your kiss.
Lost in your hold.

Listening to your soft heart beat.
Your lips caressed against my neck.
Your whisper in my ear.

My hand across your stomach.
Shivering at your touch.

My hands in your hair.
Your soft smell lingers.
Your sweet taste on my lips.

Hold my hand.
Hold my hand tight and never let it go.

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Because I love him.

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Show me how much you love... by Nidaeah. 1000 points, ended October 31, 2008, 40 entries
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DawnKestrel
November 4, 2008

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A really good poem.
Good luck in my contest!
CookieZeal
October 31, 2008

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Congrats! A lovely poem.
SageyBaby
October 29, 2008

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loved it
i liked the flow and i love the passion in this poem, i feel the love!Consumed in your kiss.
Lost in your hold. - great line , a work of art this is. great write - keep it up
IrishGypsyRose
October 11, 2008

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exsquisite
I love this immensely. I like the flow and form you used and the emotions it made me feel. You did beautifully. Best of wishes in my contest. (like the pic btw) Yours in poetry, gypsy
Nidaeah
October 9, 2008

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WONDERFUL!!
I absolutly LOVE this! Thank you. It is still innocent, yet still there is desire. I like that very much!

"Hold my hand.
Hold my hand tight and never let it go."

That is a beautiful line. The love of my life has often said that to me. And I still get goose bumps everytime he does. Thank you! Best of luck!
sapphireangelwings
October 1, 2008
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Beautiful. Short, sweet and very tender. Thank you for your entering.
Hannie
September 29, 2008

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awesome poem dani....shows how much u love him!!!

yer i also love the photo at the top....mabey because i took it!!! nah jks lol
Age of Rain
August 16, 2008
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This was an adorable write. Filled with love and emotion. Well done!
XxYoru-OkamixX
August 13, 2008
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^^ this is really cute and was my pleasure to read, great job ^^
musik-freek
August 5, 2008

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Aww this is so cute dani! Just gorgeous. You create the image of your love for him in words and I can see it clearly. Just great work. Ps, is that pic of your hands, coz i swear it is! If its not... But yeah, have kudos coz i love you
movedon
August 1, 2008

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Beautiful!! I love the image at the top, but also the images that you created with your words!! Wonderful work here.

Warmest,
Mylee