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Unforgiven

Unforgiven
The dying heart will not come back
We can’t reincarnate
We will never see eye to eye again
It’s hard to live with the pain of seeing you
I can’t look in your eyes
I’m scared that things changed
I haven’t felt this way
Today, I just wanted to see you
I was first happy…
Then… That’s when you didn’t seem to care for my being
I feel unimportant…
Will you ever see me as I do you?
Or have we just lost ourselves?
We are falling apart…
I’m alone still… I gave in…
Alone… You have consumed me…
Sorrow
Hatred
Death
Pain
Alone
You all want me…
And now I’m open to your infliction.
Take me
Make my blood run black
Take what’s left of me
Take it all
Just torture me
Make the tears fall
Spill my blood
Pull this trigger
I’m gone
I’m gone
I’m gone
I’m gone
And still so unforgiven..
But you won’t take me.

Author notes

I wrote this a long time ago, and it was once dedicated to someone, but I refuse to write the name. This is how people can make one feel.

It's my first poem. Is it any good?

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  • Nienna Calmcacil
    August 26, 2008
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    I didn't know about this poem...I had been randomly looking at your page and I noticed that I hadn't read it before.
    It's...terrible. No, not how it was written, just... it's so sad...

    If the person to whom this is for is who I think it is... I promise that you will never be hurt by them ever again. I'll do everything in my power.