Playing pretend,
Realising you're no friend.
Everyone has one
Traitor, betrayer to some.
Each has a reason,
None care about treason,
Deciding to act, to care.
Finding out they won't be there.
Reality crashes in,
Is there no end?
Empty words spoken faithlessly,
Never intended to help me.
Denial is all I can breath.
Serpent in reprieve.
And I just can't believe,
Really, were you only here to deciece?
Each moment, just a lie?
Every second another alibi.
Vast stupidity, I believed in you.
Even when they turned away too.
Repaid in only surprise,
You never cared for my cries.
Who would have thought,
Her innocent caper, all caught.
Even though I know the real in disguise,
Regret is all I can surmise.
Escaping me is only this...
"Ignorance truely is bliss."
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Author notes
First letters spell something, excluding the last one in quotes.
Just a little something that came to me while I was stuck thinking about some of my so-called friends...
What do you think?
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hey hun this was a really sad poem. you wrote it with so much emotion, its so heartfelt. i know exactly how you feel on this one im having my own issues with friends. i hope you and your friends can figure something out. and i hope things are going well for you. just remember you deserve the BEST!! your a wonderful person and friend and dont deserve to be treated like crap..im sorry i havent read any of your work for a while. i promise i will do my best in catching up
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Aw, don't worry so much with catching up, its fine. Thanks for the comment and the hope/best wishes.
Hope you're doing well as well!
Best to you.
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I thinkthis is deeply moving, and i can definatly relate
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Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it, not so glad you acan relate, but everyone has a friend like that at one point I guess.
Oh, by the way, I didn't mind the random message, I was just afraid I'd met you before and forgotten you. >.< I have a very bad memory...
jan
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This is a great poem, but I am curious as to what brought this about. You are write of course. But, what inspired this poem? Keep up the great writes.
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Actually, it was a friend of mine who's been drifting off and never talks to me anymore. It's sad, but this is how I feel, like we're not really friends anymore, their just using me. But everyone has at one point, I'm always the person everyone comes to when they have problems.
Thanks for the comment.
jan
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"Who would have thought,
Her innocent caper, all caught.
Even though I know the real in disguise,
Regret is all I can surmise.
Escaping me is only this...
"Ignorance truely is bliss.""
Great work. I loved it.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
jan
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You did a great job writing tis hun, even if it is sad. I liked it, and its good your choice of vocabulary is increasing. good job hun *hugs*
Luvz ya!
~~Tori~~
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Thanks for the comment.
jan
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A good work, though unfortunate in its conception. May we all learn from times such as this
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Thank you, such words are most appreciated. ^__^ We all try to learn from our mistakes, though mine was of kindness...
jan
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well written. the punctuation is perfectly placed to enhance the tone and the rhyme is well worked. you handle the acrostic nicely...it's usally so lame, but i liked this one. sorry to read the author's note though and see that you were writing from real feelings.
lots of love
, Dannie
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Unfortunately, I'm sure other people have experienced this problem too. It's sad, but true.
jan
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