I close my eyes
Float ever so gently away
As I bask in the warmth
Of every breath you take
Taking in the tenderness
Of touch
As your fingers glide
Across my skin
While I breath you deeply in
Memorizing your scent
This memory is a
Reality
As your lips glide across mine
To expose your every emotion
As my soul falls into you
I open my eyes
While the revolving door
Of memories
Spins
Throwing me back into myself
For this love
That is miles away
Author notes
I wrote this for my boyfriend who is in Iraq.
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautifully written and a feeling thats ooh so true to many military girlfriends... bought a tear to my eye as i think of my boyfriend while hes away in the army.
May god bless you both and keep all our troops safe xNx
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Very beautifully written and I am
so sorry that the two of you are
so far apart. It's quite and
unpredictable feeling that leaves
you empty deep inside until the one
that you love finally comes home to
you! I hope that your boyfriend is
safe and that he returns to your arms
very soon! Take care and thanks a lot
for sharing this here. Good luck in
this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
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Thank you very much!!
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awww tis is beautiful and i hope everything goes nicely for the both of you *hugs*
thanks for entering and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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