Love through space, never a touch,
dreams hoped for blessings
evade finger's embrace.
Tears shed from longing the caresses
...of loved flesh.
Hearts pounding from excitement
of typed messages sent longingly
through space,
with hoped for returned
caresses desired in instant moments.
Emotions beckon for confirmation of sent kisses.
They travel... ever to our dreams.
Not understood as real and factual...
but laughs and sneers are belted from
heartless murmurs.
Looks of reproof ignored
in favor of the knowledge,...
that true love has no milestones.
Yearning just that once to
hold and caress fingers.
To walk close...
and share twinkling eye's
that smile and say with face to face
voices,
...I love you.
Author notes
aaahhhh shucks, it's love long distance ! AP Name: [PoeticLove]
Written for....He knows!
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luna and lorcan,
up in a tree.
K...i...s...s...i...n...g!
First comes love
then comes marriage,
then comes lorcan,
pushing a baby carriage!!!
hehehe....
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lover I Haven't Met by Mc25.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES!!! ENTER NOW!!! by xCandieKissesx.
475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you Think???
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awwww this is beautiful and yet sad..men are pooey...
but anyways love you and wonderful write, tanks for entering *hugs*
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Lovely.
Tears shed from longing the caresses
...of loved flesh.
Hearts pounding from excitement
of typed messages sent longingly
through space
Oh my! I definately felt the passion burning up in here! Great job and good luck!
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Wow i really liked this, especially the first 3 stanza's
"Love through space, never a touch,
dreams hoped for blessings
evade finger's embrace.
Tears shed from longing the caresses
...of loved flesh.
Hearts pounding from excitement
of typed messages sent longingly
through space..."
It didn't have a ton of structure, but it was still one of my faves! 5/5 babe
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Thanks, So glad you liked it, and I know you feel it too,
It's hard to deal with......
poeticlove
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lol, the poem followed by your author notes was definitely amazing!!! I laughed, lol, good luck!!!
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you are horrid
muhahahaha
thats like saying id be pregnant 0.o -
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no worries, little steph, thats not my entry, will be back later with a work of art, hehehe
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little? *lifts eyebrow* whas the mean? lol
and i know, hehe, just picking, sheesh, you picked first
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your my [little] daughter, Stephanie
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well thank yas, *huggles*
xoxoxo
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