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The Perfect Guy for Me

His eyes so loving as he looks in a mirror.
Hes so conceited but they push me under like a current,
They are so blue you could drown in them.
His lips a cherry red and quiver when he looks at me,
Every quiver seems to spark his raging hormones.
His hair is a dark brown and is fun to mess up.
I can get his attention by walking past,
Or my favorite making him so mad at me that he comes to me.
His complexion so smooth as if never been touched.
His hand so rough but tender with love.
His smile reminds me of a innocent little boy.
But dont be fooled he has his flaws.
He always get in trouble which is so cute in a way.
His jokes are so wrong I think that why I like them.
His heart seems so stern but is sweet to the touch.

And if you ask him what his most prized possesion is.
He will look at me and grab my hand, pull me close and say...
"My most prized possesion is...FOOD!!!"

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A contest entry

Did you feel that way when you were in my position? Could you feel my emotions?

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    September 23, 2008

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    I think it's really cute, haha, sounds like a lot of guys I know, of course they're more like brothers but whatevs. Congrats on your bronze!


  • Beverlynohime
    August 1, 2008
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    beautiful write. well deserved.


    • insane172
      August 2, 2008
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      Thanks.

      I am glad you liked it.
      Sadly most guys I know are like this...haha

      XD


  • Mignonette
    August 1, 2008
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    HAHHAHAHA that is so cute!! the ending is hilarious :]]]]
    does this guy actually exist?

    • insane172
      August 1, 2008
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      He does.

      I know him. I dated him. He always thought 24/7 about food, like me. Speaking of which... Im hungry...
      Anyways. I am glad you liked it. I hope you like my others.
      XD


  • Meroza
    August 1, 2008
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    Hahaha, a really funny and romantic poem you've penned here. I like your work.

    Best of luck


    • insane172
      August 1, 2008
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      Thanks

      I am really glad you like it. I hope you like my other work as well.


  • Titus gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    If he says you are his prized possession, then you have the right man, good luck in your search, Quite unique in structure, a list of preferences it seems.

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