Together we stand,
we praise our Father.
Together we serve,
we love, well... everybody.
We laugh as we make terrible shots,
a Frisbee to the face,
thats always a good one.
We cry, we definitely share tears.
Tears over each others burdens,
tears over one another's heart aches.
But with our Heavenly Father,
we can "let the good times roll."
The tears fade away,
as we hit the world unknown.
Together, with Father,
we will stand.
Author notes
pretty much thinking itd be awesome to have a good christian girl, who loves God first and foremost, enjoys sports, and wants to be in ministry. So whoever she is, this contest is for her, and of course God, our amazing Father :-P.
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol, its got one funny line :-P. Im a bit corny, so I hope thats cool :-P. if its not humorous enough, I would understand.
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sorry contest*
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I wanderd why you'd read my poem lol it seemed a little random..you enterd the contest too!thank you for your nice comments
and without sounding abit like im saying it for the wrong reasons Yours is really good too!
frisbee to the face? lol
Good luck also in the context! xxx
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why thank you :-P. LOL, Im kind of corny, so I hope it wasnt to bad :-P. Im definitely glad it made you smile. And thank you for the contest, I havent written in awhile, so it was cool.
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aww this is kinda cutesy and silly, i hope you find that girl someday *hugs*
take care and thanks so much for entering, and making me smile
Stephanie ♥
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