Who's that girl looking back at me,
Looks as if she's in pain, for she's crying.
Her hair blows around her face, wildly,
Yet she does nothing about it, just sits there staring,
Looking straight into my eyes.....
She has no name so I call her 'she'
A tear falls down her cheek, for I no longer swallow these lies...
It's so hard to believe that this girl is really me.
Author notes
Prompt 3.
Fates illusion
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Wow, like it alot.
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
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love it lots!!!
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Kind of reminds me of Reflection from Mulan.
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This is so heartfelt.
A wonderfull write and I wish you all the best in the contest. Rose
Ps. could you please put the option in your authors notes. thanks -
i love this its so genuine
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