Father, am I pleasing to Your eyes?
Am I all that I can be?
Please guide me in my blindness;
Your Inner-Light to see.
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A contest entry for:
Quickie
If you Could speak to God one on one, what would you say or ask Him?
by creationsfromheart
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A contest entry
- Quickie by creationsfromheart.
465 points, ended July 31, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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"You formed my inward parts;
You covered me in my mother’s womb.
I will praise You, for I am fearfully and wonderfully made;
Marvelous are Your works,
And that my soul knows very well.
My frame was not hidden from You,
When I was made in secret,
And skillfully wrought in the lowest parts of the earth.
Your eyes saw my substance, being yet unformed.
And in Your book they all were written,
The days fashioned for me,
When as yet there were none of them."--Psalm 139:13-14
David, who was "a man after God's own heart" wrote this
poem. He had a relationship with God and realized what he wrote here.
God is good, and has made only good things.
If you are built a certain way, God likes that. He not only loves you. He likes you. When things are created in Genesis, there seems to be a kind of exuberant joy from God, like a child making something. He's excited about what He's doing. It didn't change when it came to you.
This also includes your personality, which is reflected in your writing style. He also likes that. If a human has a problem with it, it's simply their problem. That may change a few people's idea about being harsh in criticism.
But who you are is enjoyed by the Lord. He loves it so much He wants you with Him. So He sent His Son to save you.
Yes, there is sin. It exists. But even parents often still love their kids when they do wrong. Real love seeks to help the ones who fall.
God's love is real. Just as you are real.
What I've shared here is real.
God bless!
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Magnificent!!
Excellent question You posed and Love the rhyme as always
This line grabbed hard:
Please guide me in my blindness;
This is a Beauty
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Of course your pleasing to God he created you. No matter what you do he will always love you. Nice prayer like the flow and rhyme too hehe
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A beautiful plea, nicely put. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a beautiful prayer thank you for entering and sharing with me your thoughts.
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oh I have prayed this more than once! We are continuosly hungering to please God and I believe He is pleased with this entry!!!
Good job my friend
GBY and best wishes in this contest.
SilverButterfly
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