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Sweet Infinity

You resemble that sought after chalice
of Arthurian legend spotless;
filled to rim with pomegranate juice
and sweetened intention to address
that which my full spirit does confess:

A love so deep, heart needs no excuse.

Remove from equations all malice;
cleansed by Aurora Borealis.

Deduce numeration for night stars
and add to infinity what is ours.
 
 

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  • notorious gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    Pomegranate juice huh? Nice

    'Infinity' is such a cool word.

    You grate the cheese of cheesiness very well Mark

    I love your first 2 lines--mythic much? It's kick-ass.

    "pomegranate juice" My favorite part.

    "sweetened intention"
    NICE

    "Remove from equations all malice"
    Ew, math...but this rocks my face off


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 1, 2008

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    Phew, this is wondrous to the senses. Beautiful write, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 1, 2008

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    such wondrous beauty and love reigns in your heart like novas shining under the galactic halo. superb and many loving blessings to you both xxxx Love you Bro best wishes!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    awwww this is gorgeous, i think i know your inspiration, ashley is so precious and pretty
    thanks so much for entering and good luck *hugs*
    Stephanie ♥


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    oops, first time I forgot these lil guys

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    This is just so beautiful I love it . And I know that she has the same love for you and awaits the day that you are together urmmmm so hurry up .


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 31, 2008
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    good luck bro!


    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      August 1, 2008
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      Is done if you wanna read.

      • Carolina Moon gold member
        August 1, 2008
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        Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh how deeply beautiful,passionate..the list goes on.. Brother dear you are a true romantic! What a gorgeous and loving write. I wish you both every happiness always!!

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