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Taken bit by bit
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Then swallowed by the byte
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I'm deciphering a feeling
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That's elusive at first sight.

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More a little joke to myself than anything. I'm not really expecting anything constructive on this one. I never thought I'd use binary in a poem. And, what's this? BSOD? Oh noes! All the hidden meanings!

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LoveAddict
October 9, 2008
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same here
alittle random but still a good read
Walls-within
August 24, 2008
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well...really wierd, and a bit out of the ordinary. I like it, lol
Yorkshire Rose
August 1, 2008

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Unique
Certainly bizzre, but thats what makes it work even better, and the font and the numbers, keep going cos im likeing what im reading
sassykitty
August 1, 2008
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Definitely interesting if a tad abstract.. I liked the randomness (is that a word? if not should be) and also the ambiguity of the 'byte'. Actually, I've just re-read it and I think I understand it! Not even going to attempt a crit, because it doesn't need one, reads just well as it is. Will definitely read more of your work, it's always cool to read those who catch the mind. Cheers.
SilverWolf
July 31, 2008
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Wow!
thats good
a little bit odd and diffrent but really good!