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pickled lunch

Want to see what's in the jar
Pick it up and run real far.
Eat a pickle with a crunch
and there is a recipe in a great lunch
But then again...i like cucumbers
Eating them in big huge hummers
The taste is much amazing
either way they are
that's why i can my pickles
in that big glass jar!

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  • Loki silver member
    July 31, 2008

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    Sorry, use of o in the first line. also it comes in just under the minimum line requirement.

    Nice try and good luck next time.