Perverse happiness
and child-like glee
fills your days,
as you burn ants
using a magnifying glass,
shame flickers
but doesn’t reach the pit of your stomach.
Please tell me what you think
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Very interesting write. On one hand it makes me think of my days as a carefree child and the awful things I did to helpless creatures, but on the other hand it makes me think of the world in general. It's amazing how a few lines can speak volumes.
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interesting....the title threw me off very much you have to explain it to me sometime over the phone lol
<333 You LYLAS
Tress
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Wow, haven't seen a lot from you lately, then you drop this one. It's so short and seems to speak volumes. I think I understand the poem itself, but the title throws me off a bit. I have to admit, what I think it might mean could be way off. Even still, I think this is one of my favorites of yours.
How have you been, BTW?
-Ryan
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Hey sorry this took so long. I've been concentrating on my last month of summer; which left me little computer time. And as for the meaning; it kind of is something I felt. Like an allmighty maker with no concern for his creations; a game if you will. I don't know, it was a quick write that meant alot to me when I wrote it.
And I've been well, doing the teenage run around to enjoy my last bit of summer freedom; but school started today so I'm finaly getting back to some structure and hopefully back to my writing. (: How have you been? -
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I've been great. I've been enjoying the summer too, so I haven't been writing much either. I don't really have the will to force myself to write, but I'll get back into it more eventually I'm sure. Glad to hear from you.
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